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Broken faith |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
I stare into the night across the still waters. It starts to rain, the storm hastens. It reflects the pain the soreness in my body. The lightening burns scorching my eyes. Thunder rages throughout drowning my screams. I fall to my knees holding my head. Sorrow filling my soul broken is my faith. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It will be restored again one day, it will. Liked this heaps Deverone!!  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
This one is simply and precisely stated. Well Done ! Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Dare I say beautiful? Beautifully Dark...how's that? Good Job, Deverone. Michael |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
Thank you Isis....faith is so hard to come by nowadays....hopefully you are right....it has been so long for me without faith in anything...including myself. Jenny, Michael...thank you....Passions has given me somme sense of faith....no judgement or cast down looks that I have found here to tear down what is slowly being built back. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
I see a beautiful trend here, perhaps a storm series?!?! I adore the rain be it monsoon or mist. It brings me to life like nothing else. DB ------------------ There's someone in my head, But it's not me. ==P. Floyd== |
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