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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-13 06:57 PM



We drank from the cup of life,
All the glory we did share,
Before, since or after,
Has anyone even compared?

Do you curse those decisions,
That changed both our lives,
Knowing you'll never feel that way again,
No even if you try five wives.

Assessing the soul and all it's connections,
Sharing dreams, hopes and fears,
Such passion, unbridled, we rejoiced,
Even shared some tears.

So much shared, nothing can compare,
Simple things such a treasure,
Respect and interest too,
It always bought such pleasure.

Loss we then lived,
Pain and disbelief,
Enclosed in faked identities,
We'll never again know such relief.

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
FreeByrd
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 267

1 posted 1999-11-14 12:05 PM


So many times I've searched for things I thought were lost. Finally realizing I just didn't see.

Been there. Sometimes I still forget my glasses, it's only human nature.

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-11-14 12:17 PM


Great read;I especially liked verse three.
Hit close to my heart....Warrior Princess


Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-11-14 05:59 PM


Thanks again Jenny Lee and Free Byrd

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
4 posted 1999-11-14 08:44 PM


So give me something that is for real.
-KoRn-

thoe lyrics portray the feelings this poem gives me
great read and very heart felt

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life is short kill quick

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
5 posted 1999-11-14 09:59 PM


I'm there, Still feeling some of that,I.

DB

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-11-14 10:57 PM


Thanks guys

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
7 posted 1999-11-15 10:47 AM


ha - I love this one, Isis. very well done.


Michael

For_Never
Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America
8 posted 1999-11-16 10:58 PM


Human nature cannot be more throughly defined. We always seard just behind where we are, for something that cannot possible be better,,

Great Read.


EAB

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