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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Within those walls.. the dark blood did flow.. seven hundred year ago... the last of a line was slaughted .. by saxon hordes... Within those cold walls... their souls still mourn.. let those who enter be forwarned.. On horse back he rode, to pick up his love.. to young lovers...from their homes did run.. against parents law..their hideous decree and the only place safe... was that castle by the sea She was a beauty.. flame in is soft curls was her hair.. He had the hint of noble decent.. aristocratic face, tempered with brown hair midlength decent.. To that castle they stole... where other would not go.. for fears of the rage..trapped seven hundred years ago.. So...with on love, and fear not found.. into haunt they were bound.. Inside they felt an odd touch... and their hands together they flet flushed.. and a looking into the eyes of the other.. they fell deeper in to lust.. undressing quickly...they made passionate love never know, or caring... that salvation was in their blood.. as made their climaxes true.. two spirits , in anguish so long, once again felt each others touch.. and to those young lovers, celtic by descent... forever welcomed to their haunted home.. Edward A. Beerman 11-8-99 |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Not good Edward, I LOVE it. You can meet any challenge my friend. Thanks  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Brava Edward, I love the Gothic feel of this one....well struck Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
I concur ,E. Very nice backdrop to this one, but I'm prejudiced towards the Celtic. My ancestry would be proud of you. DB ------------------ Right out of the grave they came and made small talk. --"In Honor of Their Daughter"-- ==John Mosher== |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Great work, Edward. I love the tone set to this one. Michael |
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DreadedOne Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51Odessa, TX |
I could get into this type of thing...with the castles and nobility. You draw a fine picture. ------------------ D.O. Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting. Dreams are reachible, love completing. |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
Thank you all for the statements... oh, and I apologise for all the errors, I was a bit tipsy on its forging.. Oh, and Deep, I to am prejudiced to my own Celtic ancestry... but, alas, to my own saxon ancestry as well.. ------------------ For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent... |
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