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BoyToy
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
everett, wa, usa

0 posted 1999-11-02 06:56 PM


The therapy has failed, my thoughts afloat
Nobody understands me,I've no time to gloat.
The killing time is here, cant be delayed
There is alot of payback due, they must be slayed

Mom and Dad should probably be first, because of them, my desire for affection is a constant thirst.
The rest of the family safe for now, if I escape, they will wonder when and how.

Next comes the boss, and all his pets
a simple squeeze of the trigger will help me forget. Then off to the clinic I will be,
firing madly, maybe they will finally see.

I expect the voices to stop, somewhere along the way, but they will always wonder who I was, and why I chose to shoot that day.

The cameras and talking heads will appear, I will be called a quiet loner, someone nobody feared. But alas, they will know now, to fear me forever, you see I could just be your quiet neighbor.


Please don't read more into this than there really is
BoyToy

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A dark, black past is my most valued possession...D. Mustaine

© Copyright 1999 BoyToy - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-03 07:48 AM


Really like the way you wrote this one!!

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-03 12:17 PM


Chilling thoughts! Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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