Dark Sonnet#2 (repost to this forum)

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Dark Poetry #1

Dark Sonnet#2 (repost to this forum)

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-08-22 05:48 AM

Seeing her sleeping, Walt got out of bed.
He knew she was cheating on him anew.
The lover meant nothing, that's what she said.
Elisa was unaware that he knew.

It was the letter he found that damned her.
The letter spoke of a forbidden love.
When Walt found it, madness began to stir.
The answer hit like a bolt from above.

He laid his sharpest blade against her throat.
Whispering softly, Walt said, "Elisa?"
With smiling face, he says, "I read the note."
Slicing with the knife, he bends to kiss her.

Poor Walt, for killing his wife on a whim.
He didn't know it was written for him.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-19 06:19 PM

I know I've read this one...why I didn't reply to it is completely beyond me! It is a wonderful poem...Its a favorite I have of yours.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-19 06:40 PM

Excellent.This loses nothing with time.Loved it then,love it now!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-10-20 09:04 AM

A glowing Dark Gem Dreamevil!!!

Jenny

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