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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana

0 posted 1999-10-31 02:59 PM


I thought you were different
I thought you'd understand
I thought you were the one for me,
and I the one for you
I thought you'd turn my life around
I thought you'd help me stand
I thought your words were true,
and you know I'd never lie to you

But you were just like the rest
And you couldn't understand
You were never the one for me,
and I was just a toy to you
You sucked the hope out of my life
And when I reached out for you,
you always let me fall
Every last word that you said,
was most likely a lie
I never tried to hurt you,
even when you burned my trust alive

And I guess I thought wrong...
well never again

© Copyright 1999 Morgana - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-11-01 09:20 AM


These Mindless Thoughts echo my own...Well Done.


Jenny

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

2 posted 1999-11-03 09:58 AM


as budha teachs

All is true, All is not true

who are we to decide what is lies

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Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-03 12:09 PM


Been there...know this feeling well.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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