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Dark Poetry #1

Confusion Tide

D.B. Whyte
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 94
Crest Hill, IL, USA

0 posted 1999-10-27 11:14 PM

The longing of my heart distorts my thoughts,
twists my ideals.
I lose touch with my own feelings,
wishing only to understand what moves her.
My mind is washed over by the sea
again and again.
A confusion tide rolls in,
My lungs fill with water.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-10-28 05:12 AM

Love the way this ends....'tis true we can drown in the confusion of our own thoughts and longings. Beautifully done. Welcome to the Dark Forum btw.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-10-28 08:43 AM

Wow,really liked this one...confusion tide...I believe I've rode that wave.

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-29 01:58 AM

'Wishing to only understand what moves her' great line.Enjoyed the read.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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