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Deverone
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA

0 posted 1999-10-25 02:07 AM


Splashing across white,
running across pink,
tasting so sweet.

Draining down tunnels
fulfilling endless dryness.

Refreshing and cool is the drink.

Heart and soul
quenched to the extremes.

Today I drink from.
the blood of my prey.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



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Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-10-25 02:16 AM


Dark and chilling! Liked this one.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-10-25 02:39 AM


Very twisted. I like the color imagery.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

DreadedOne
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since 1999-10-25
Posts 51
Odessa, TX
3 posted 1999-10-25 04:27 AM


Cool...I like this one.


Dread

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