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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-16 08:08 PM


"I say no more you say come on it helps."
"NO NO MORE i say and you reply just one more."
But I know the truth behind this lie.
You will pester and you will keep at it until I give in.
But I shall not give in.
"Come on man its natural."
"Yes but I need that not."
Annoying words fill the air.
Im getting angry about to explode.
"NO I will not."
"You know you want to."
I must not give in.
"DO IT MAN, COME ON IT WILL HELP IT WILL MAKE YOU FORGET YOUR PROBLEMS"
I do not want to foget. I need these problems.
I finnaly explode.My anger spills and I leave the creak 1 friend short.


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life is short kill quick

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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-10-16 08:33 PM


Peer pressure is indeed a terrible thing. If a friend would only be your friend under certain conditions, he is not truly your friend.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-16 09:19 PM


I agree w/ Sys...peer pressure is just a deterrant,to keep you from following your dreams. Never give up. Keep sharing your Soul!!
Much Love and Many Blessings,
Jenny Lee

Midniteyez
Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 20
Soldotna, Alaska USA
3 posted 1999-10-16 11:57 PM


Wow.
Anger can be a truly powerful thing.
Not to mention the pressures that others apply.
Very good job.

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-19 03:15 AM


Nicely done. You must first be true to you before you can be true to others.Never let anyone pressure you! Be yourself.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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