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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-16 07:06 PM


Plastic love, chemical smiles
The pain of reality drowns the denial
Gut the fish, shoot the deer
Supress your hate and choke the fear
You can't always run from the things you despise
The acetone truth devours the polished lies

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

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JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-16 09:27 PM


Sys, I love every word! You are very inspiring!! Brava!!

Jenny Lee

Midniteyez
Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 20
Soldotna, Alaska USA
2 posted 1999-10-16 11:53 PM


This is one I'll have to think about.
=)

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-19 03:12 AM


Excellent verse!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 1999-10-19 10:18 PM


Hit the nail on the head with this one...a very poignant piece.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?




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