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suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

0 posted 1999-10-14 09:36 PM


Take me up in your arms.
Take me away with your wings so white.
Lead me to heavens gates so pure.
Take me to him so I can be reborne.
Take me .

Please give me a new life.
Why do I ask you?
Why do I ask for your help?
Is it desperation?
Or is it faith?
I consider it desperation.
For I have never needed you before.
Now I only need you for a second.
Will you listen?
Will you hear?
Will you care for this sinner.
Will you care for this evil before you?
Can you cure the hate?
Can you cure the loneliness?
Do you even exist?
Yes you do.
But because i have faith in you not, you deny me.
Even so there are many more gods.
One shall deem me worthy of guidance.

© Copyright 1999 Tom - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 1999-10-16 04:20 PM


I really like! Your work is getting better and better!!

Jenny

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-19 03:07 AM


Liked this one.Well done!

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