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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-06-01 10:37 AM



I saw the light
drifting on the sea
the eclipse
darkens the morning

Heat spreads
Fire on the horizon
Forever onwards
Forever into the past

All we can see
In the darkness
in the fire
Into the night

Are we all done
are we beyond hope
in this futile world
Just a lost cause

You will see me
Spread Across the Sky
On the wings of angels
there i will fly

On through the night
into the day we last
We will continue on
I will last forever


 "Prophet!" said I, "thing of evil!- prophet still, if bird or devil!-
Whether Tempter sent, or whether tempest tossed thee here ashore,
Desolate yet all undaunted, on this desert land enchanted-
On this home by horror haunted- tell me truly, I implore-
Is there- is there balm in Gilead?- tell me- tell me, I implore!"
Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore."

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-06-02 01:28 AM


You will see me
Spread Across the Sky
On the wings of angels
there i will fly

On through the night
into the day we last
We will continue on
I will last forever
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"hello darkness my old friend ...
I've come to talk with you again"...
I love this one mr. poe...
poets do last and live on forever thru thier words...
nice to sse you posting again.
later-poet gator.
jm




 There are places inside our souls ...
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts ...
that need to be loved this much.
~Janet Marie~

"What the caterpillar calls the end ...
The world calls a butterfly"
~Lao Tze Tao~
~Butterflies are meant to be free~


JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2000-06-02 04:49 PM


The second to last stanza.  Yes! that's the clincher there.  My favorite.

Joy

Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-06-03 01:39 PM


Damn my friend, I can't stand it when people start flying around me!!
But I will howl for your flight.
I like this one my friend.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

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