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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2000-05-24 12:42 PM


Sad heart, aching heart,
Confused, crying, lonely,
Broken heart

Dark heart, black heart
Cold, angry, bitter,
Evil heart

This heart of mine



 Not all those who wander are lost. ~J.R.R. Tolkien

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-05-24 01:18 AM


EagleOne~
I think I have begun to glimpse into your heart and I see no evil ....
Hope the heart within you lightens with gladness.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lonelypoet
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2 posted 2000-05-24 06:53 PM


EagleOne,
Great poem, such a moving theme I hope to see more.

Isis
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3 posted 2000-05-24 07:27 PM


I hope your aching heart soon embraces hope and love again,  

 I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn.....
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



SpitFire
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4 posted 2000-05-24 08:20 PM


~Ouch!!!,....my heart after reading this.  *Hang in there...thanks for sharing. *Peace.
Joel the wolf
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5 posted 2000-05-25 01:52 AM


You for got
Great heart, loving heart.
listening heart, expressing heart.
You are all these and more.

For every shadow, there is a light.
and you are both.

Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
6 posted 2000-05-25 09:29 AM


Marge....I think we all carry some darkness in our heart, thankfully in most cases the light shines bright. These days my heart is in fairly good shape.    Thanks for reading!

Lonelypoet.....Thanks for taking the time to read, there is more floating around somewhere.  

Isis.....Thanks! there is always hope, as for love, well ......

SpitFire......Thankyou for reading!

Joel...Thanks for reading and for your comments. "For every shadow, there is a light" ...very true!



 God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



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