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Spilt Milk!
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Spilt Milk! |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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Spilt milk is what your glaring at NO WAY to get it back in the glass DISGUSTED by the mess we have made How to clean it up we both ponder? Standing there, appraising the damage. What a catastrophe we conspired Only wanted to stir love???? Had no idea we would be left with this And now nothing, but spilt milk left. Trying now to figure things out We have seen the better side of life Seen the down side many times too! Wondered what was out there?????? The things we both thought were lacking So we went in search of .....?? A better cup! Yes, a new love! And look at where it ended up! A wasted consumptionm, illusion! We could never clean it up now Too big for us to handle So we both just choose, we choose this.. To walk away and ignore, Never come back again, To the reality......yes Of.....the mess we both made! And how to put humpty dumpty Back together again!!!!! |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes you are right Illuson, we can't cry over spilt milk that we have done. and humpty can't be put back. So What do you do? you go on. and learn. I love your work kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
Hey- I REALLY loved this poem. The analogy was soooooo cool! It fit perfectly. You obviously spent a lot of time on this one. This peom just had so much to it! *sigh*...i enjoyed it very much! It made me stop and read...it was fantastic. Not to mention i think spilt milk is rather humorous... bye Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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