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Such a tiny hole....
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
handle me with care they say... i was broken...sanity has spoken and arent you glad ..you painted me this way? must not mind..the sound of decay and the question goes...how does such a tiny hole suck out whats left of me.. and leave you absent..but ALWAYS in control "you can have my isolation..you can have the hate that it brings you can have my absence of faith..you can have my everything" "so impressed with all you do..tried so hard to be like you..flew too high and burnt the wing..lost my faith in everything" The Jackal |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
What a short powerful poem, my friend. it does seem that we are portrayed insane, And that they maybe gone, but with a sense of great power over us. With no visible physical sign. (a small hole) Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow,...what strength here in your words. Well done. "and the question goes....how does such a tiny hole, suck out what's left of me...and leave you absent...but always in control"....powerful text. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and leave you absent..but ALWAYS in control ---------- hey Jac... this poem is EXCELLENT and cuts deep. powerful truths for sure. and your signature is awesome by the way. take care, jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving How one move just puts me by myself There you go just trusting someone else Now I know I put us both through hell ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me And I'm not sayin We ever had the right to hold on I just didn't wanna let you get away from me. ~MB20~Leave |
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