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Embracing The Blade
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Embracing The Blade |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My lover's beauty tempered by cold reality reflects my own torrential desire to know her... to feel her gentle slide into me... her cold kiss rushes heat to her entry of me as my juices flow out around her Eager caresses are how I greet this puissant lover showering her with kisses of my own... warm soft lips press to case hardened steel... each intimate meeting lingers as her taste incites my desire I express my love opening myself to her... with quick avid thrusts she brings me ever closer to the release I crave so I surrender to the orgasmic release of death and embrace the blade. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Excellent! Well written. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
I must say, this is by far the best piece you've written to date. The energy of this just grabs you by the throat and refuses to release it's grip. Sequels as a general rule fall short of the original. Not so in this case brother. This is truly a masterpiece. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Could not have said it better myself! Tis truly great! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Deeply, darkly, enriching Dream. You have surpassed my already high expectations of you. Great work indeed. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
DE, I told you I'd be honest with every response. If you had not pointed me to this poem, I would never have responded to it. While your work continues to amaze me with it's beauty and brilliance, this poem offends me. I cannot see the fascination you describe. But then, we are different, that's what makes the world go round. I know you will be disappointed in my reply, but I must be honest with you. I don't care for the subject matter. Sorry. |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
As a lover of words, the great depth of expression in so few words in this piece is magnificent! The words chosen express so much, yet the poem seems to have been written in such heat, that it reads as if it was written quickly.....doubtful one could write so intensely and provocatively quickly, but with this author? Perhaps it is the case! Excellent! ------------------ Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Excellent treatment of an avoided issue. An unusual approach on the facination, repellant nature of the unknown. ------------------ ~GS~ |
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OBLIVION Junior Member
since 1999-10-04
Posts 21 |
This is wonderful work. It is true inspiration for something I have been trying to accomplish for years with the same subject matter. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent here. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Dream...Awesome work here...I enjoyed very much!!! Jenny  |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Sensual and hypnotic ... the choppy arrangement of your words left me panting for more with each line. Very well done. --Kess ------------------ You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end. |
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