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paulsm
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 48


0 posted 2000-05-06 05:39 AM




Trust

You’ll never know the pain,
Or damage you have done,
To all my love and trust,
Until this course has run.
~
For Trust is grown from words,
A whispered in your ear,
In those special moments,
When the one you love is near.
~
Words grow into actions,
That flower then into trust,
To have a life together,
That flower is a must.
~
Words not backed by action,
Have a hollow empty sound,
That leaves you often wondering,
When your love is not around.
~
To tend trusts big garden,
Put thoughts before the word,
Make sure that you are able,
To grow the seed you stirred.
~
To many seeds you’ve planted,
Have withered up and died,
Left me feeling lost and empty,
When a part within just died.
~
Trust was never offered,
In the life you had before,
Perhaps you’ve never learnt,
The value of that score.
~
Think of how you are,
In my words the trust you know,
For in my words and promises,
My actions I did show.
~
So tend your garden gently,
For the seed has strength to grow,
Put thought before the words,
And lifelong love you’ll know.



 Slow Down, stop to smell the roses and stroll through the garden of life, it will be a more pleasurable experience.

I think of you always Honey XXXOOO.

© Copyright 2000 Paul Middleton - All Rights Reserved
Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
1 posted 2000-05-06 09:26 AM


My thoughts have gone first with me.
This is a great poem.
Joel.

 I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

2 posted 2000-05-06 12:11 PM


~Such truth here.....I really enjoyed reading this.  Words not backed by action....gosh I know that too well.  Take care.
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