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Scarlet Lady
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-05-03 11:54 PM

     One single bud,
soon to be birthed in the sun.

Glory  awaits the beholder,
     patience is the key!

The fragrance  experienced,
     knees that go weak.

     Beauty  breathless,
A peaceful abandon of rest.

Waiting for this blooms show,
     Anticipation  grows!

Red as crimson when it comes,
     Bursting with the sun!

Love is patient like the rose,
And it's beauty surely  grows.

"Life is what happens while you are busy making other plans."  John Lennon

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

1 posted 2000-05-04 01:22 AM

this is beautiful!!! i have such little faith in love... i needed to read that slow does it grow. soon it will show its tender face. thank you!!

kynder

The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

Joel the wolf
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 1333
Angels Camp

2 posted 2000-05-04 09:04 AM

Yes kid Patience is the key.
I reside within this now, for my flower to grow. I love this kid.
Joel.

I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

3 posted 2000-05-04 10:35 PM

perfectly beautiful???beautifully perfect??? Not sure which way that goes....perfectly beautiful.....yeah, I guess that's it..but it is...the concept, the image you painted in my mind,...the theory about patience...well, damn, ...the whole thing

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2000-05-05 07:46 AM

Illusion~
Such beauty in this, I enjoyed reading this very much and I'm reminded of all my standard roses I'm planting down my drive way

Thanks for sharing this
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2000-05-05 08:52 AM

Your poem of wisdom is beauty in itself! It's short and to the point, sometimes less really is more. Well done! Yes, patience is the key when it comes to love and life.

"love is patient like the rose
and it's beauty surely grows"

now that is a perfect and beautiful line that you have penned.

This is the only poem that I have read by you and I am very impressed!

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

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