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SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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0 posted 2000-04-22 08:32 PM


~Rusty Memories~

Rusty memories bleed
a wound reopened
refreshed
visions of your nightmares
times I'd tried so hard to forget
still there.....still stinging
eyes tightly closed
pushing away all that you were
take off running
mouth wide open
sing so loudly
in the street,...in the intersection
fast cars beeping
laughing I fall
tears drip while I laugh
this traffic jam I've created
is helping me forget
helping me push you back
down into the hole
in the back of my head.
Don't rescue me
don't call for help
I needed this......
more than any of you will ever know.


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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2000-04-22 08:47 PM


in the midst of every chaos there is a sanctuary. I've been there, and believe me, this poem speaks volumnes, it is
heartfelt and must have come from much pain. it took courage to write and post. very...very good

 Kathleen


SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
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2 posted 2000-04-22 09:07 PM


~Thank you so much for your response,...it means lots
Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
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Angels Camp
3 posted 2000-04-23 01:49 AM


We do come close to death at times in our lives god knows I've had my share, but sometimes it's in our making. be careful.
Don't loose sight of you.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-04-23 07:09 PM


Joel is spot on hon, don't lose you and this was wonderful work!!  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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