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ZuMBLe Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 33 |
If I If I were falling Would you use all your strength to hold me up high? If I were lost Would you offer me your hand and be my guide? If I said my world were filled with problems Would you close my eyes and make my problems yours? If my heart were broken Would you lend me yours? If I were too afraid to move on Would you help me open doors? I am Will you? |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ZuMBLe~ If I can I surely will...  -SEA |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
powerful message with a cool style ,i enjoyed that one a lot |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Just take my paw, my friend. Joel. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great Poem, I will try and lead the way..... The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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ZuMBLe Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 33 |
Thank you all for your kind words.. You know whats kind of freaky? I wrote the poem left justified.. Then when I centered it.. It kinda looks like an angel.. Its freaky to me.. because of what the poem is about. And the fact that I wrote it about a person that I used to call an angel.. Freaky.. hehe.. Zum |
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