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Buried deep |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This story is old, about a broken and closed heart, one that has been forever told, in the beginning the very start. I had grown cold to the worlds woe, and the child in me that cried I had wrapped what was left of my heart buried it deep it had died. Then you came along with your baby blue eyes dug up my heart, you alone heard the cries. Our time together was almost more than I could stand a true life with you a woman me a man. I had never know such love and passionate bliss, you had opened my soul with just one kiss. Now it seems you are frightened of my love of being possessed you say you need your freedom and the opportunities missed. I have taken a step back and have given you your wings knowing I could never posses with chains nor strings. You opened my heart, and had taken it to your breast it no longer beats within my chest. You had given me I guess what you could of love now you fly my white dove. Now there is nothing left to carry, not even an empty shell Now there is nothing left to buried, as time has forever told, and will forever tell. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Wow...this is such a great poem, such familiar emotions to. ***** I had never know such love and passionate bliss, you had opened my soul with just one kiss. ***** The whole poem was beautiful, but i especially liked this stanza. I truly loved your poem. Take care |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it made me cry for it was too close to home, excellent writing. Kathleen |
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