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There is no Happy Ever After
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There is no Happy Ever After |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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There is no such thing as happy ever after, Unless of course I can be with you. I don't want an endless eternity, Unless my love, I'm with you. You've opened my eyes, taught me so much, How I long for your silken touch, Don't want to wander unfilfilled through eternity, And I won't be fulfilled unless I'm with you. Your loving ways, Your manly body, Your beautiful soul, Oh God, can't you see? I want to be with you now and always, With you alone, I want to pass my days, So much in common, yet more to discover, A little taste of heaven if you were my lover. I want to be with you, See what you see, Love what you love, Our union forged with the stars above. I'm no longer willing to accept second best, All others fail when you're in the quest, No more absences, no more broken hearts, Only with you can my happy ever after start... There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Isis, I truly hope you will be with your love soon. You deserve it and nothing less. Powerful poem full of love and passion. Excellent work. daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Isis. . . this is powerful. . . full of strong emotions and feelings. . . Excellent work, my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
This is beautiful and very powerful i love it good job on this one Isis |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You've opened my eyes, taught me so much, How I long for your silken touch, Don't want to wander unfilfilled through eternity, And I won't be fulfilled unless I'm with you. Your loving ways, Your manly body, Your beautiful soul, Oh God, can't you see? I want to be with you now and always, With you alone, I want to pass my days, So much in common, yet more to discover, A little taste of heaven if you were my lover. -------------- isis this is SO beautiful, and so full of your emotions...longing and desire done to perfection!!this is one of my favs of yours. take care, jm The stars shine so bright, now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face, Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close. Now I will reach for the stars... Because Oh my love, that's where you are... Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea... vertical horizon |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone, Janet Marie, glad you liked it so much   There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Isis I love this poem...so lovely, so beautiful, so romantic....my favorite line..."a little taste of heaven if you were my lover." James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks James  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
This was beautiful and filled with longing Isis a wonderful touching poem ((((hugz)))) Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
when i saw the topic I was kinda  cause I live to see a happy ever after...you know? I'am So glad...you too It was so simple and beautiul...gonna send it to someone... thanx a lot ISIS If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
This is great it say’s so much, of what can or could be. or what should be. Thank you for sharing Joel. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
unless I can be with you...... it flowed with love Kathleen |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Isis~ you tricked me!! I thought this was gonna be a angry poem.....my romantic heart can't help but to believe in happily ever after...This was FANTASTIC! I really like this one!  -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Isis~ I was the same as Sea, I thought it was going to be about lost love, or a love that had just ended, Instead it's quite the opposite. Tracie~ P.S Fantastic Poem Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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