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sports2girl
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 14


0 posted 2000-04-05 07:07 PM



As I look into your dreary eyes,
I see the pain you must be going through.
You have a deadly problem.
You feel your life can not be fixed.
You want to talk to someone about your feelings,
But you dont know who to trust anymore.
Your best friend left you when you told her your deepest secret.
She told you she left you because she could not handle all the pressure.
You dont know what to do anymore,
You dont want to die but you feel like that is the only way out.
You try to hurt yourself to get all the stress and pressure you are feeling out.
You feel like no one understands you anymore.
You used to be so happy and well liked,
Now whenever you say something you are afraid someone will have a bad comment about it.

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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-04-05 10:10 PM


Wonderful work, I feel so sorry for people who live this way, I was a little like that myself for a while, it is emotionally horrible.  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-04-05 11:23 PM


Wonderful poem indeed. I agree with Isis on this. awful feeling, most awful.  Hopefully in time they'll see it and fix it.  

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


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