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Hope, tears, and renewal
Member

since 2000-03-27

Posts 74

0 posted 2000-03-29 04:41 PM

Never speak,
Never lie,
Never question,
Never die.

Never live,
Never cry,
Never falter
Never fly.

Asked so much of,
Made demands,
Never questioned
Where we stand.

Now has crashed
Can't use her wings,
Afraid to cry,
Yet afraid to sing.

Lost herself,
Right at her best.
All because she
Never guessed.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2000-03-29 04:49 PM

Hope~ this is amazing!! I like this very much.

-SEA

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

2 posted 2000-03-29 06:54 PM

This is great! I enjoyed reading it

The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-03-29 06:56 PM

Well done, simple yet deep

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Sandra Cox
Junior Member

since 2000-03-24

Posts 48
Essex, London,UK

4 posted 2000-03-30 01:35 PM

Great words, wonderfully expressed.

Sandra

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

5 posted 2000-03-30 02:42 PM

Hope~
This was beautiful
and expressed very well.
you did a good job
~Angie

Broken Wings
Member

since 2000-03-18

Posts 157
Miami, FL.

6 posted 2000-03-30 02:53 PM

This was os filled with emotions. I love your style. looking foward to more.

take care

Broken Wings

"As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT

ShadowHeart
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 49

7 posted 2000-03-30 09:12 PM

Hey, GREAT POEM! I hope you haven't lost your wings...if you have, we'll be here to cusion your fall, my friend...

Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

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