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A state Of Depresion, yet not as so
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A state Of Depresion, yet not as so |
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DziR Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 11Sydney, Australia |
The Mystery Suffering From The Unknown Pain. My mind is blocked...... I can’t think clearly....... I am doing stupid things, that I know I’ll regret later. I try to be happy, not for my sake, but for the sake of others. I am trying to act normal, I just can’t though. Everyone is starting to notice it too. No one can do anything, I don’t want anyone to help. This is just one of those things that I need to figure out by myself. Just one of those things that in time will heal itself. With hope I pray. I pray that one day everyone, will forgive me for what I am doing. It may seem wrong now, but in my heart it feels right. All the things that used to come naturally to me, now are the hardest chores. Waking up each day. Being bright and cheerful. Now are so hard. I can’t eat-I can’t sleep-I can’t even smile anymore. I’m sure it will pass. It’s probably just some phase. I have no answers, no thoughts. All that is left is my naked body, my naked soul, my naked mind. Everything is so superficial. My life is upside down. With me standing on my feet. I keep trying to stand on my head. But that only makes matters worse. It will change in time. All I can do is wait, until the storm passes, so I can pick up the pieces of what was once my life. |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
A very sad but powerful piece of writing. I hope that you will be able to smile again very soon! Sandra x |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
DziR~ Welcome! I hope you smile soon too. Until then, here is one from me  -SEA |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
DziR, WELCOME! this is a very powerful poem....keep faith that one day your life will turn right side up.  **HUG** take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Wow. That was so incredible... I feel your pain... I feel the same way you do. Or at least the same way your poem conveys. I don't think anyone could feel *just* like you feel. Am I rambling? Anyway, that was a great piece of writing and I wish you luck in "waiting for the storm to pass" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Dzir!! What a wonderful piece of self analysis here! I too hope and know the storm will pass and you will again be surrounded by rainbows There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
welcome to passions!!! wow! nice piece of writing! i can definitely relate, my friend, so let me say (from one who has reached the other shore) it will pass!!! promise! keep going! you can make it! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Most Warm Welcome to passions, You Poem conveys many feelings I once had. It is a most difficult phase, but it will phase and you will come out Stronger than ever. Be Strong and patient. The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Angel Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 11 |
Always remember to use your wings. Great poem! ~*Angel Usagi*~ |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
DziR~ This is a great poem and it is very powerful. A little constructive critisism..if you wrote in a different format it would be even more powerful then it already is... just my opinion. welcome to Passions & Dark Passions. I've been in this forum for 2 a day now and i think its my favorite so far ~Angie |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
DziR.......well no one yet has captured in WORDS my own experience like you have. It is always THOSE writings that HIT right to the center of humanity, that I think are the best. You have done that very well here I would say! Thank you so much for the wonderful read.......I devoured it! I also saved it!!! (I do not do that much...but this one deserved it....as it was from the heart!) Hope to read more of your writings soon!!!! |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Depression is exactly as you described, as I know too well, however it is one that is very treatable, and you should not have to suffer it alone. I hope you can reach out to someone, that is willing to help. If you would like to email me I'm a good listener, sometimes you just need a listening ear. |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Welcome to Dark Passion Dzir you really are good at capturing the essence of sufferings.... lovelt work dear  hope to see more of it ..... |
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DziR Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 11Sydney, Australia |
I guess most people would think it a bit crazy writing to one's self. However, I'm not actually writting to myself but rather every single person who has read my peom, and replied (also to those who have chosen not too). I wrote this poem in October 1998, and I am pleased to announce that I have found the lighter side of life. Occasionally I still get depressed but I have learnt to realise just how much my life has to offer. I thank those people who have offered to lend an ear, but I now have learnt from my own experiences to turn them around into good, and also to help others by just being there. I was deeply touched by all your replies!! thank you all so much. I've been writting poetry for about 3 years now, so if any of you would like to hear some, send a msg to me and I'll be sure to get back to you! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A nice style of writing...easy to read and understand..glad to read you are feeling so much better now. James |
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