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Anthony Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 12 |
Control are feelings? Such exuberant thoughts Lots of sevens, no noughts. The earth has so much to offer, never let us stray and proffer to the gods that night shall soon be upon us. As the beat goes on without excitement, as screams emerge, the begining, joyous, soft passive words sung so sweetly, but with such a hard edge. The world in disguise? Most of us are beyond the reach of the sun and breathing air, purified, humidified and at the right temperature, for our comfort? I thought i had done so much more. |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Anthony, I read this through, with wonder as to what it truly ment...Then I read the last line..... Absolutally Wonderful!!!! **smiles sheepishly** Thank you for a vibrant read! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
deep in thought with this one... well expressed soul searching good work take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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