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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
"UNTITLED" The darkness silently settles as another day ends, Tired people crawl into their beds and soon settle into a deep sleep. But I am still awake, Thinking of all the sad days and lonely nights Since you've left. By: ~Me |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Keli, welcome to our family of friends. And a wonderful poem, short but speaking volumes.  Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Keli1019 Junior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 31FL |
Hey, it's like my first poem, so hopefully they'll be getting better!! lol! But, I hope ya'll enjoyed it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WELCOME to Keli!!!!!! you've come to the right place to be inspired to write poetry...and your off to a great start. enjoy it here  take care,janet marie Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
WELCOME- Wonderful poems. Sometimes I feel that way. Like no one else feels like me. but obviously people do feel like me sometimes! Well, Welcome and I hope you like it here at Passion's Poetically yours Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Way to go, Kelly! That was great! ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
A wonderful first poem. As Isis said, short, yet speaks volumes. Welcome, and looking forward to more! Something has to change. An undeniable dilemma. But I am not a burden anyone should bear. -Tool- |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Hey, great poem!! I hope you post more of them! See ya around the boards! "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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