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Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-09-19 01:10 PM


Screaming babies
Alone in abortion cribs
Screaming
They plot their revenge
On unworthy
Unwanting mothers
Even as their tiny world
Comes to an end
Before it begins

© Copyright 1999 Systematic Decay - All Rights Reserved
Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
1 posted 1999-11-07 07:21 PM


My boy is adopted from a birthmother who chose to give him what she could not.

DB

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-11-07 08:18 PM


Very precisely stated Dear Heart.
Alone in abortion cribs.
I can hear the cries Amy...


Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
3 posted 1999-11-07 09:54 PM


so short so truthfull
I for one hate abortion for it never gives the child a chance at all

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life is short kill quick

Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
4 posted 1999-11-07 10:30 PM


I am very pro-abortion, I just decided to write a poem opposite my point of view.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-11-08 01:01 AM


Thought provoking...I too am pro-abortion.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-11-08 01:08 AM


I am more against abortion than most. I know for a fact I wouldn't be here if abortion was in that small country town in 1967. I was adopted instead. Wish those babies could have a revenge. Great work

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
7 posted 1999-11-08 05:05 PM


Arghh, very cutting work, Sys. Very strong vantage point. Liked it much.


Michael

Deep Blue Me
Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396
By a big lake
8 posted 1999-11-08 05:08 PM


It shows your range, Sys. Great job.

DB

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Right out of the grave they came and made small talk.
--"In Honor of Their Daughter"--
==John Mosher==

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