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mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

0 posted 2000-01-25 12:28 PM

walking in the rain,
with a faded photograph.
looking back on the times we used to share.

wondering what went wrong,
where we've been and where we've gone.
thinking of the times we used to laugh.

the rain keeps coming down,
running down my face.
hiding the tears i cry inside.

tears for you and me,
of how is was to be.
and the memry that never lets me be.

walking in the rain,
with a faded photograph.
looking back on times we used to share.

praying for the rain,
to wash away the pain.
in hope that i find you.

mo.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-01-25 06:55 PM

very touching poem, oh if only the rain could wash away the pain...beautiful thought, beautiful poem. Janet Marie

..."She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it."
Matchbox20

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

2 posted 2000-01-25 10:24 PM

thank you very much janet marie. mo

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

3 posted 2000-01-26 12:46 PM

Mo such longing and sadness. I love the rain it is wonderful for young lovers or good for cleansing the soul

Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member

since 2000-01-24

Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

4 posted 2000-01-26 04:46 AM

mo,
that made me cry. i loved it. it was very moving. keep it up. you made me speechless.
your friend
jesse

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-01-26 05:00 PM

Mojar you brought back some lost memories.
I remember many years ago the night I broke up with my Love for maybe the third time. I had walked to her house on a beautiful evening to visit her and I thought our relationship was surviving at that point. She told me it was over and I was heartbroken and I couldn't control my emotions or my tears and as I started walking home it started pouring down a hard hard rain and I was soaked in a second. I was totally soaked by the rain and my tears. And when I was about halfway home my past love drove up in her Volkswagen and said come on James get in, you'll get soaked. But you know it was one of those times when you want to be alone. Thinking about this brought tears to my eyes today and you know what, its raining outside right now, but the rain is soft and gentle. Wonderful but sad memories. James

armanca
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 211
Tennessee

6 posted 2000-01-26 07:03 PM

I love rain... Rain can be many things. I liked your poem...*smile* well done

Carman

poetry_kills
Senior Member

since 1999-12-04

Posts 549
new orleans

7 posted 2000-01-26 07:09 PM

mojar: i've felt this often and you express it wonderfully... i hope you find them and i hope to read more of your work here soon...

sincerely,
jerome the boy with no soul

A savage place! as holy and enchanted
As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted
By woman wailing for her demon-lover!
~Coleridge

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