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DeviantInLove
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0 posted 2000-01-23 08:28 PM


bitter

on this day of irreconcilable differences & suicidal tendencies- realizations, sour in taste, made. when love doesn't always conquer all, but what love when one-sided? i watched her sleep and thought for a moment i watched her in death and ran away- this night when everything i give still isn't & never will be enough. But know that this won't ever fade. in all these whispers of repeated moonlight sonata & consciousness of the proximity we share- i hear her breathe, as the smell of tequila surrounds her. inspired thoughts i see & surreal memories of a night passed. i see how strong she is tonight. and i see my weakness now.



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Dude, are you ok? Suicide is never an answer to ANY problem, especially not one with love involed. I feel your pain.- SEA
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Dude, are you ok? Suicide is never an answer to ANY problem, especially not one with love invovled. I feel your pain.- SEA
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