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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
The devil in you ate a piece of me today Did it taste like a cake? or was it a burst of a lemon flame. The devil in you played a game in me Wrapped me up and counted my toes... pink polish you said? The devil in you killed me again. It took of me... and drank what i had. The devil in you saved me tonight. I finally saw him in the light. and now i'm just left with the devil in me. |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Very interesting to think about Another this way!!! What happened to you to think this way?? You do not have to tell the room but only me id you wish...Bojopy@webtv.net...I can and will relate to you!!!!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Bojopy... Are you sure you want to hear about the things inside my head? I think i'll take you up on your offer though.  Carman |
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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
Carmen let me in if you wish!! I am a person who is and done it all...tell me!!!! "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
alright bojopy...Now your in. *smile* thanks so much for last night. Carman |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
carman: this is wonderful... vivid and moving and slightly disturbing... the ending is fantastic... i'm really coming to like your work a lot  sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Thank you Poetry_Kills... I appreciate it. It means a lot to me...that someone else likes my work. Carman |
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sentientincubus New Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 1 |
Very very good, I loved it! I'm wondering... How did the devil save you tonight? |
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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Sent... When i said.."The devil in you saved me tonight"...I finally saw the wrong in someone I had blamed myself with for a very long time. And I could finally place some blame on him...instead of myself. Yet I made it clear that...there are still things in me that need to be made right. (the devil in me) carman |
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