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Dark Poetry #1

Taking Him Away

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-01-20 03:30 PM

Limiting my Life
Taking you away
That will not help
I will get him back
I love him
You really can't take him away
I love him
And I won't let you

-Neala
(Goddess of Sadness)

[This message has been edited by Neala (edited 01-20-2000).]

brandywine
Junior Member

since 2000-01-19

Posts 19
Illinois

1 posted 2000-01-20 03:33 PM

Short...but I can feel the emotions.. be strong and they can't take him away.

We are each of us angels with only one wing...
and the only way we are able to fly..
is by embracing each other.

JD
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 61
N Prov

2 posted 2000-01-21 12:08 PM

Strage but i like it

JD

Everything Dies

Bojopy
Member

since 2000-01-03

Posts 391

3 posted 2000-01-22 03:10 AM

The longing for a lost love.. How much it hurts but does happen.. I can only say one thing that helped me and that is write write write and write some more......Bojopy

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)

~Venus~
Member

since 2000-01-27

Posts 128

4 posted 2000-01-27 07:35 PM

I may be new here, Neala, but I can spot good poetry when I see it! This is good...and I can definitely relate to it.

~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

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