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Bojopy Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391 |
"If would and If could be changed. Would you change If for would or would you keep If and Would the same?" "Would life still be known" If you ever; ever even tried Would death mean you're alive? If you feel your in trouble Would your God be a devil? If you knew what everything means Would your realities become dreams? If you gave in the least Would the sun go west to east? If death took you back to the hearst Would your years turn in reverse? If your life seemed somehow cheated Would the months seem repeated? If you still had questions to ask Would the future be in the past? If you would had known Would your life be known? If you have always known Would life still be known? This is the second part of a piece I did under the name Two-worlds. I would suggest reading if you want to understand this. And then answer the question at the top of this piece. Thank you if you do!! It is a weird thought I had!! ENJOY< !signature--> "Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy) [This message has been edited by Bojopy (edited 01-19-2000).] |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Interesting! I like it better when the woulds and ifs are changed around. P.S. I thought it all sounded familiar. I had to go back and check. It's all the same lines, just paired differently. And with the woulds and ifs opposite of the woulds and ifs in this. Whew! confusing. I suppose that's what you wanted.  Different and interesting concept here. And quite enjoyable. [This message has been edited by danni (edited 01-20-2000).] |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
what Would I do if If was to change I guess I could not look at life the same Life would be twisted, all turned around If dark is light? Would the sky be the ground? This question is good, a little bizarre I think I'll keep them the way they are.  |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
well, to answer the question at the top... i like it either way, they both have interesting meanings, so i'm pleased with either outcome... now i have to go and try to find the other one... else i'll have no idea why i like it merely_a_jester |
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