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Bojopy
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0 posted 2000-01-13 01:53 AM




Starving for a seductional serenity
To be born again....born into infinity
To never remember.......or ever forget
the end & begining of the internal trip

Be alive with no sight of any death
But in death still alive with breath
And see all that is within & without
But never again; have questions of doubt

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


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dreemr
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 34
Covington, LA, USA
1 posted 2000-01-13 02:10 AM


WHOA...this was awesome Bo...cool title too.
haze
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since 1999-11-03
Posts 528
Bethlehem, PA USA
2 posted 2000-01-13 02:42 AM


well done poet...your layering is marvelous! Extreme Kudos!
Bojopy
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3 posted 2000-01-14 03:01 AM


Thank you dreenr and haze this was a moment in time that will never be forgot!!!
merely_a_jester
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 67
Arkansas... that's all you get
4 posted 2000-01-14 03:14 AM


i truely enjoyed this piece
it had depth and i'm just a sucker for alliteration

merely a jester

Bojopy
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since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

5 posted 2000-01-14 04:39 AM


Thank you merely!!! Where is your submittance to our family let me know?????  I will read all the words you submit and give a submise that will astonish all!!! LOL

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


Bojopy
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6 posted 2000-01-15 06:07 AM


I wonder does anyone think about what it would be like to die and come back to life???  I really wonder...hmmmm

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)



danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
7 posted 2000-01-15 11:44 AM


I agree with what has been said already. This is an incredible piece. I have never really thought of coming back to life after death. But, strange as it may be, I wonder what it would be like to for my soul to sick around, as a ghost I suppose, and see how life moves on after I am gone. I don't know if that seems egotistical, but I just wonder sometimes who would really know and care that I have passed on. (besides my immediate family)
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