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FiendingAngel
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since 1999-09-13
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Minnesota

0 posted 1999-09-16 05:33 PM


Your eyes are more beautiful than any others I have ever seen. So beautiful that it hurts to look at them. I look into you and see sadness, melancholy, as my pale blank face, that you claim once again, is the most beautiful. You are drowning in false happiness. Wake up you screaming soul. For now I am the scary man who taps on your window, at the stroke of midnight. Tap tap. Wake up, tap tap.


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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187
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1 posted 1999-09-16 05:42 PM


Another good piece, this one didn't have the shock value to me of, "Silently Screaming" but it did make me think, and things that do that always please me, thanks for posting another good one!

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"Threatened by Shadows at night, and exposed in the light" - Pink Floyd


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