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gOdeSslOve
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
Santa Clara CA

0 posted 1999-09-16 02:10 PM

This is from like 7 months ago, not so good but i hope you guys like it

Dieing-

In my corner
I ley
I ley with your picture,
and tears running from my face.
Bloody eyes...
Sour lips...
Letting your memory keeping me
Out of place.

Whispering softly,
"I love you"
Dreaming and wishing,
This is not true.
Kissing your picture.
Thinking of our past.

I'm dieing of loveing you
Dieing inside.
I pray out loud with words I
can't understand.
I can't speak.
I'm crying for you so bad.

Letting it all hit me hard.
Why.. is my question.

As i die...

gOdeSslOve
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
Santa Clara CA

1 posted 1999-09-16 02:19 PM

Here's a little one i thought i should share.
I wrote it around Valentines Day...

it's called:

You-

-the dawn approaches again,
and i wake from a dream of
your love.
A million stars seem to explode
in your eyes.
Lightning, a fire burning in
my heart.
When you apear, i hear a cupid
singing an aria.
A song full of love makes me think
of you.
And remember when we love the lust
and passion you put me through.
Last night i knew i had felt the
most;
of me in you...

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kinda mushy huh?

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AmOr y Salud,
gOddeSslOve

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-09-17 11:23 AM

I wouldn't call it mushy.
I think it is from a soul
that has been stepped upon by
a lover who didn't have what it takes to care!!!
Keep on writing!!!

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Helewes

gOdeSslOve
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
Santa Clara CA

3 posted 1999-09-17 04:02 PM

Thank you so much

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AmOr y Salud,
gOddeSslOve

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 1999-09-17 06:50 PM

This is great - and two for the price of one none the less.
Beautiful work and no, not mushy - longing.

Michael

gOdeSslOve
Junior Member

since 1999-09-12

Posts 23
Santa Clara CA

5 posted 1999-09-17 08:21 PM

Thank you Michael.... he, hee...

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AmOr y Salud,
gOddeSslOve

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