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BoyToy
Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23
everett, wa, usa

0 posted 1999-09-12 10:56 PM


Look in my eyes
fear me
hate me
Look in my heart
Pain is so real
touch me
share me
Make me your victim
Lowest form of life
force me
rape me
Slave to your grind
Life worth nothing
not real
not true
Take me away

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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-09-18 04:58 PM


very good....i liked it alot


Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 1999-09-18 08:26 PM


Very deep,
I love the emotion puring forth.

Michael

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