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Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

0 posted 1999-12-27 09:56 AM

In chains, locked in a cage.
Behind bars, overcome with rage.
Armed with nothing, a ball and a chain
they hold me here, I've got nothing to gain.
Entranced, sorrow devours my soul.
My heart aches, my head hangs low.
My mood is morbid, heat dissipated across my neck
hatred is boiling rapidly in the pit of my stomach.
The life I live, isn't life at all
When I try to walk, I only fall.
I stumble into reality, anguish captivates my being
A prisioner in my own flesh,
is life really worth the living?

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

1 posted 1999-12-27 10:23 AM

Whoa... Lil 1,

This packs a WALLOP !!!

I like this much. Each line stronger than the next.

Keep em comin.

-RS

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-12-27 06:00 PM

Welcome to the dark forum

This packs a wallop indeed!! We've all felt this way, and can relate

Looking forward to the next

Reach inside your heart, that is the greatest gift you can bestow. Merry Christmas..
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

3 posted 1999-12-27 08:17 PM

I can relate to this, Lil OnE. Is life worth living? I hope so.

JOY

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-12-29 12:45 PM

I hope so too....exellent work, this indeed packs a punch.

*Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

5 posted 2000-01-02 06:04 PM

Well, I hope your answer was yes - cause I sure would love to see more of your poetry. This was excellent.

Michael

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

6 posted 2000-01-04 01:51 AM

Well, it's all been said already, and I am in agreement. Welcome!

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

7 posted 2000-01-04 08:55 AM

Excellent Lil OnE

I agree with all who replied before me

Welcome!!!!

Jenny Lee

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Lil OnE
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 234
Pasco County. Fl.

8 posted 2000-01-04 12:58 PM

Many thanks to all of you. YES life is worth living, it's just that sometimes, you arent able to realize that because you are so blinded by hate and rage and other emotions... making it impossible to see anything that is good. Only bad shines through. But I DO realize that it's worth it. Again... many thanks!!
~ Lil OnE ~

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