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She Feels Guilty |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
How many times I've heard Nothing, everything's Ok I hold her in my arms And know it's not this way Preoccupied with something It's not so hard to see I hold her in my arms She feels guilty to me What was it about last Tuesday Or was it who she saw I held her in my arms I felt a broken law An old flame with a new job? With more flexibility I hold her in my arms She feels guilty to me |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Oh wow! Do I know this story. You have written it very well. "Or was it who she saw I held her in my arms I felt a broken law" I loved that. It is the story of how my love ended. Just replace the she with he. It is the worst feeling I have known. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Hey dan, actions, looks, moods...speak so much louder than words, eh? Everything ya got is wanting to tell you no, no, no and you're hoping somehow you're wrong, but...you "just know". If ya don't mind me asking, you, after how long. email me the answer if you want. And, thanks for your response. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Your welcome lostboy. I e-mailed you, so let me know if you got it O-K. I've never e-mailed anyone before so I have know idea if I did it right.  |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
What a horrible feeling that is to have. images of my loving ex coming to mind...hahaha Yeah, I felt it to but dared to believe her over instinct - I would have lost either way, I suppose. You have my every sympathy and empathy on this one. Michael |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Gripping... Loaded me up with emotions. Keep em coming LB, this piece is a WINNER!!! -RS There must be some kinda way out of here... say the joker to the thief There's to much confusion, I can't get no relief - Hendrix |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I've never had to face this situation..but by the way you described it, i dont think i want to....great use of emotions lost! Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hmmm. . . that feeling isn't one that I would wish on anyone. . . been through it myself. . . well done lostboy. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
As always LB...I adore your unique perspective  Jennifer  Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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