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Open Poetry #32

Kiss me like you mean it.

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-05-05 08:40 PM

kiss me like i'm your best friend,
kiss me like you mean it
kiss me like you would if i were her..

broken dishes
broken hearts

i'm yours
screaming emotions
you know i'm here
waiting..
its 6:00 and you don't care
it's 6:01 and i'm gone..

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2004-05-05 08:47 PM

exhale,
Wow! That's laying it on the line. Powerfully done. Hope the hurting stops. This is very well done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-05-05 09:09 PM

Chelsea~
Poignant emote of the heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-05-05 10:22 PM

Powerful write Chelsea ..
Hope things are okay now.
Hugs~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2004-05-06 12:43 PM

Nice writing...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-06 02:34 AM

best to not waste any time

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2004-05-06 09:28 AM

Well done!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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