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blackandwhitehorizon
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since 2003-05-05
Posts 183
an akward state of mind

0 posted 2004-05-04 06:20 PM


Pushing aside my embroidered white curtains
I stare through the pane of glass that is my wall
as I sigh.
My heart whimpers and a tear of my own guilt
slides gently down my cheek.

I see the tops of trees
Poking above a rooftop
And drifting cotton clouds
Sliced by black telephone lines
And Blue skies
peirced by the red radio tower.
The beautiful evening sky,
burried in the town.

Where is all the Beauty?

It would not be hiding from me.
It is being held back,
tied town and tortured,
Forced into seclusion.
With this horrifying mask of paved sidewalks
and choking mufflers
I wonder,
Where are my Flowers?
Can no one else see we are stepping on
our complexion? Our Beauty? Our chance for a future?
Am I losing my mind?
Or are we still searching for ours. . .

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-05-04 06:28 PM


Very thought provoking write and much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

swatcatpettus
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since 2004-04-12
Posts 57
CA
2 posted 2004-05-04 07:10 PM


An amazing write, kudos, and thank you for supporting my poem when others weren't.
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2004-05-04 07:34 PM


Wonderful poem
TD

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-05-04 08:04 PM


Enjoyed...James
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-05-04 08:08 PM


Excellent.  So true.  I often think as I drive home from work "what was he thinking?  Building that!  Can not man remember beauty?"

Susan

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