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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2004-05-04 05:43 PM



Jenks didn’t talk much
After he came home from ‘Nam
Just stared out the window a lot
As he sat every morning at the table
In Betty’s that faced the sidewalk
While others around talked about price of cows
How the rain was needed
And about the prospects for next years team.

A few of the old timers
  Would speak to him as they came in or out
Slap a shoulder and give him the usual
“good to have you back Jenks”
then walk on to the counter

As for me,
     I sat in the corner booth
Watching and listening to the goings on
Until it was time for me to go.

Jenks, just stayed until about 11 everyday
Then wandered off to someplace

He didn’t work
And no one ever said where he went or how he lived

Came around in a few months Jenks was gone.
Some said he
Left the lights on in the house his mother left him
With the doors wide open and the stereo blasting
Some damned fool rock station
As he  packed his old car one night
Then headed out of town on old 5 Hwy
Going south.

Neighbors went round and shut the house up
Turned off the lights and such
Figuring he was blowing off some steam
And would be back
                                      Soon

Old house was still empty
  5 years later
‘Cept of course for the critters
who had crawled through the empty windows
and now claimed it as their own
which was about the same time I read
the law was hunting some man
in the woods out east for killing another man
after a fight broke out about who got the window seat
in some little rundown place off the main highway.

They said the fellow was dangerous and armed
Knew how to live off the land

Never did hear of Jenks after that
        
But once in while I drive through the old town
And stop at the square where they have a flag
And under it a bronze plaque of all the townsfolk
Who served in the military

And there is Jenks name
                    Right under his brother’s

The one who came home in black.

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1 posted 2004-05-04 06:19 PM


You have books in you.

sigh.

(and shush)



Tell us more?

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-05-04 06:25 PM


Yes more please,...
this gave me shivers.
Excellent Captain.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-05-04 07:42 PM


Nice...James
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-05-04 08:05 PM



The goosebumps are having
a field day on my skin.

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5 posted 2004-05-04 08:28 PM


On my next vacation I would like to visit your imagination...

This is outstanding, Ron, not only for what you said and how you said it but for what you didn't say that still manages to be heard. Bravo...

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-05-04 09:42 PM


Oh Goody!!!

A new Cpat series...I feel it coming!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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