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Grasshopper wisdom! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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a scribe sits beside a praying mantis amongst tall grass breathing Savannah air while frantic mosquitoes sink skinny fangs into pale pink skin to feed on fresh red deviant pink floyd words vaguely pass tell me what you see, what is that you see tell me what you feel, what is that you feel all that you touch and all that you can see all that you taste can … be such a huge waste while you darken the right side of the moon screaming when there is … none lending a ear like loonies singing love songs out of tune there is no light seen as bright is seated in eclipsed shadows of hollow hallways dimmed by synthetic flickers of high hopes forming a haze around all that is real ....... (breathe... breathe in the air) [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (05-04-2004 06:45 AM).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
It's good to see you again, my friend It's been a long time I always enjoy your writing With best regards Liz |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i like this; its different how it incorporates their words amongst the theme and yes b r e a t h e, you crazy diamond |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
wonderful images... i can almost feel i'm there, observing the mantis, the mosquito and all  good job! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Velly good work "glasshopper".... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
all that you taste can … be such a huge waste while you darken the right side of the moon screaming when there is … none lending a ear like loonies singing love songs out of tune enjoyed your words...smiling at the ending... nothing like a fresh breath of air  M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Grasshopper...you have learned well... One of your best, yet, Sudhir. It's teach me time...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there is no light seen as bright indeed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all very much for your much appreciated responses... Regards Sudhir |
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