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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Reappearance What do I have to grieve, but what was never lost But to the ecstasy of winds in flagrance tossed Just tenderness and sentiments that marked the day And will return when winds come blowing back this way? What now remains of love that was in finger’s reach And scattered as the sands upon a crystal beach Swept to another shore on crests that dolphins ride And will come back in poundings of another tide? Which was the star that gathered dreamers in its flight And sailed to the horizon like a falling kite Illuminating skies in glowing pageantry And soon will reappear in radiance to me? I beg the blowing wind, the sea and sky to give The precious moments passed that I may now relive The love that I once tossed into the willful breeze And reappears in prayer upon these bended knees Elizabeth Santos |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Elizabeth Your words were so uplifting and so beautifully written. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz "I beg the blowing wind, the sea and sky to give The precious moments passed that I may now relive The love that I once tossed into the willful breeze And reappears in prayer upon these bended knees" I pray for this too, for you! What beauty comes from your heart, my friend. I am always in awe of the words that come from that special place.  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
What now remains of love that was in finger’s reach And scattered as the sands upon a crystal beach Swept to another shore on crests that dolphins ride And will come back in poundings of another tide? All the words are beautifully written, but I especially like these. Enjoyed very much. Susan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful piece Elizabeth. I so much enjoy your writing. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always amazed at your perspecitves |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
amazed by your sensory perception, and of all that connects and proves to us....your a wonder dear lady! hugs and smiles...Lee J. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, This is an Elisabeth gem. |
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True North Junior Member
since 2004-05-03
Posts 23 |
Thanx Elizabeth for these soothing words... they really are reliefing to read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
What now remains of love that was in finger’s reach And scattered as the sands upon a crystal beach Swept to another shore on crests that dolphins ride my favorite lines also, Liz *s M |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
The rhyme and meter were very good as was the story within the words. Enjoyed! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beg the blowing wind, the sea and sky to give The precious moments passed that I may now relive The love that I once tossed into the willful breeze And reappears in prayer upon these bended knees Liz, this was beautiful, and you "are" a precious moment! love to you and yours...Lee J. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
How appropriate that I found this on the day of my return, huh? Hello, dear friend. You make me glad that I have come home again! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I love ya  Beautifully done m'friend. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Elizabeth...Such tender words so beautifully molded by your heart. Thanks for sharing with us...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
What a lovely piece! I felt it and saw it all as I read. And this line---- Swept to another shore on crests that dolphins ride Perfect! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I tried to choose my favorite lines... and simply couldn't... for each one touches. *S* Absolutely lovely! *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice poetry! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes very nice. enjoyed reading this |
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