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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-05-03 02:21 PM


Clean rain glitters the depth of pearls
Expressing themselves
And recognizing you at once!
Like a truthful creed…they are
Poignant enough not to be ignored
Though, the city sleeps

Pearls are small but become a cause
Traveling on the breath of language
In it’s sea world
Singing to the earth
Carriers of ancient forms from a spiritual campus
Like wind in the leaves, crystals of emotions

Or the first music of dawn
And it’s hopeful purpose
I wonder if we could capture the flashbacks
Waiting with our names
Plucking notes from our words
Throwing them against the sky
Into true human feelings
Like a supplemental offering
But to the ambers of memory
We should take particular heed
For the art of living, truly is an art indeed

And so to, things the pearl


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-03 03:01 PM


Lee~
I know a pearl when I see one ...
and this is all that and more~

The stringing of your thoughts has created such beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-05-03 03:08 PM


LeeJ
"For the art of living, truly is an art indeed" truer words never said. Enjoyed


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3 posted 2004-05-03 04:57 PM


Lee, this is indeed a gem!!
Into the library it goes!
Hugs~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-05-03 07:30 PM


So lovely and well spoken
Poised and well groomed in the arts.
TD

JL
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5 posted 2004-05-06 03:17 PM


"For the art of living, truly is an art indeed"

Great write Lee J.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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6 posted 2004-05-06 03:24 PM


For the art of living, truly is an art indeed


I,too, loved this line among your thoughts

M

iliana
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7 posted 2004-05-06 06:14 PM


What a pearl this is!  
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8 posted 2004-05-07 12:40 PM


awesome
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9 posted 2004-05-07 12:46 PM


Astounding and beautiful, you make the reader think.

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-05-07 07:44 PM


Very nice...James
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