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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2004-05-03 03:08 AM



If my love you had,
would I become boring?
ater times passes,
would your heart fall asleep,
begin snoring?

Would passion run cold?,
our love be put on hold?
no, I promise it won't,
this am I told?

Promises I value not,
lessons I have learned,
getting hurt, getting burned,
promises break,
leaving an unremoveable black spot,

Would everything change?
would all become empty?
without a cure or a remedy?
life can always find a way to rearrange,

Would love become my enemy?
Would love leave?
becoming a distant memory?

Could you just love me,
just as you love me today?,
growing stronger, loving more,

To never fade away?


© Copyright 2004 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-05-03 03:12 AM


good questions...naturally I would say yes because I'm negative about love right now, and I think all things fade
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2 posted 2004-05-03 03:12 AM


this was my favourite. You've got the infliction for writing.
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2004-05-03 03:19 AM


I agree Dixie, You are not negitive..just a real person...and being real, we see the truth for what it is...Thanks...

Love ya~
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2004-05-03 03:21 AM


Thanks C..your making me blush...just writing and purging my heart tonight!

Love and Hugs
~ARH

Glad it was your favorite!

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

C?
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5 posted 2004-05-03 04:20 AM


i have learned in my short yeras that comfortable love is the best kind. not boring atall.
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6 posted 2004-05-03 08:01 AM


Great writing as always ARH... Hope things are well with you.
inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2004-05-03 09:45 AM


good questions; i'll spare my own homespun
philosophy right now and not anser; you may not want to hear

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-05-03 07:48 PM


I believe that if love starts out real and exciting it will remain exciting...building one block upon another upon a solid foundation...and finally a beautiful castle...James
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9 posted 2004-05-05 05:28 AM


This is great inteligent writing..from a heart deep...full of love....of respect...of passion unfulfilled....thank you for showing us your heart ARH....

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

A Romantic Heart
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10 posted 2004-05-05 06:01 AM


C~ Thanks again!

I agree...I do agree to what you are saying..

Love and hugs
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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11 posted 2004-05-05 06:03 AM


Jeffery..thanks!...yes all is good...going to be better....a new start on life...

This was some of the pain that was from my distant past...years back and I am letting it go...

Love and hugs
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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12 posted 2004-05-05 06:05 AM


Inkgoddess...no..really I want to hear it...please share....we learn from others..from what they have learned...Thanks!

~Love and hugs
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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13 posted 2004-05-05 06:06 AM


James..thank You! a castle is what I want! One that I feel protected and safe in...no cracks in the foundation...not a shabby shack...

Love and Hugs
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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14 posted 2004-05-05 06:08 AM


Gold..my heart is always open to be shared...
Thank You! and I would like to see your answers...

Love and Hugs
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

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