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Tim
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0 posted 2004-05-02 03:03 PM



If I were but a piece of tape,
...I'd stick myself to you,
To bond myself to you forever,
...is just what I would do.
Not on your hands or feet to bind,
...nor on sweet lips to hush,
Not on your eyes to blur your vision,
...nor on your soul to crush,
Instead, I'd seek the warmth of breast,
...to touch upon your heart,
To evermore be one with you,
...our love would never part.
Transparent I, so you could see,
...into my heart as well,
Our love's as one forevermore,
...as I near you would dwell,
Each instant of the day and night,
...you'd feel that I was near,
Free to live your life, but yet,
...I'd be there for each tear.
If I were but a piece of tape,
...I'd stick 'til time was done,
Upon your breast, near beating heart,
...so forever we'd be one.

I told one of the secretaries you could write a poem about anything, she said then write a love poem about a piece of tape...

© Copyright 2004 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-05-02 03:06 PM


Tim

You did it too...and so well!!  I'm glad you stuck to it... I'm sure this will make her smile.  It did me! see

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-05-02 03:08 PM


And you did it beautifully...much enjoyed the read Tim.
Hugs~


~I love you - those three words have my life in them.~

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2004-05-02 03:25 PM


Oh yes...you are so very right.
The lines here were very sweet.
TD

Annie Shadow
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since 2004-05-02
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Drifting
4 posted 2004-05-02 04:15 PM


Wow, this is really sweet.  Also, it was very clever and well done.  I enjoyed it.
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-05-02 05:29 PM


well done!
Corinne
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state of confusion
6 posted 2004-05-02 08:13 PM


you're a true romantic.


Corinne

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2004-05-03 02:24 AM


Tape works for me...
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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8 posted 2004-05-03 03:30 AM


Wonderful, Tim!  I belive, maybe you could write about anything!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
9 posted 2004-05-03 08:46 AM



LOL...and so you did!
Well done Sir!

Nan
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10 posted 2004-05-05 08:42 PM


I am stuck on Scotch Tape, and Scotch Tape's stuck on me... um.. Something like that... I like yours JUST a bit better, sir bard...
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