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Near Enough
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Near Enough |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Near Enough I think only this when grieving how long we've been apart - That I gave into your keeping my long-devoted heart. When darkness gathers around you and storm clouds threaten ill, When there's no one there to hold you - you'll know I always will. When sunlight dances on the sea and wavesong fills your ear, My heart will leap within your heart - you'll know I'm always near. When you lay down to take your rest with our star high above you, Remember with the nightwind's touch I'm near enough to love you. 6-29-03 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a comforting write...beautiful |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thanks shadows, at the time I wrote it, it was meant to be comforting  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rebecca~ You are writing my heart~ Thank you for sharing something that is so precious~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This wasn't written for me and even I feel soothed by it. Something like this could lull a person into love and comfort so well.. I love this. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very well done. TD |
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