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Dispassionate Science
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Dispassionate Science |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Dispassionate Science Despite the fact that my telescope inverts objects, I've no illusions. Words like 'close' and 'distant' pale. Still, somewhere within this deep, black cylinder of reflection your thoughts appear as swirls and clusters. I am illumined by the glint of your awareness. You twinkle without direction and I grow breathless. RMW |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent read. I too was peering through that telescope as I read. Great write. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh wow...what a wonderful display of stars! TD |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
JL and TD ....... Thank you both for stopping in for a 'look'. I'm such a terrible 'comet' about attendance here. It's always nice to be welcomed back. Bob |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a wonderful piece |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bob Enjoyed this a great deal...I'm so glad to see your poetry here again.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
to still the passion of... you inspire  M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You know MY request...  more, please? |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
definitely a keeper. ~tier |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
bravo sir... I do so enjoy how you write... |
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