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Open Poetry #32

Come Journey With Me

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2004-04-30 08:33 AM

Come journey with me
to dance naked
on  a moonbeam,
lie entwined in the
soft arms of a cloud
wander the cosmos
many mysterious chambers
and as morning drags
the night forward,
gather stardust to warm your
cooling fervour ‘til  our journey
shall begin again.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2004-04-30 09:45 AM

I really enjoyed this!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

2 posted 2004-04-30 10:29 AM

nice read

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-04-30 11:13 AM

HeyGal~
So good to see you ...~

'as morning drags
the night forward,
gather stardust to warm your
cooling fervour ‘til our journey
shall begin again.'

What creatively original poetic thoughts~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-30 11:34 AM

neat imagery

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